The Peguis Creek at Sunset *
I am sitting by the creek at sunset
Soaking in its
magnitude and solitude
There is a peace here
that is utterly relaxing
A spiritual calm that
envelops me
Lining this narrow
country stream on both sides are a potpourri of plants
A carpet of beige
drooping weeds
Clusters of chocolate
and mustard bushes
Towering above all are
the glorious trees
Painted lovingly in
golden brown, crimson red, and forest green
A fallen tree drinks
directly from the creek
The gentle breeze
causes the leaves to make a rustling sound
Like a soft, romantic
whisper in my ear
I also hear children
laughing somewhere to my right
And crickets chirping
somewhere in the grass below
I smell a slight hint
of pollen and smoke
But the air is clean
and refreshing
The sun pokes through
the branches and warms me slightly
For it is Autumn
Late September of an
Indian Summer
The weather is perfect
A near clear sky, but
not too sunny
Warm, but with an
offsetting cooling wind
The large dropping sun
creates tall evening shadows
On the gravel road and
un-manicured grass
And makes the dark,
slow-flowing water
Seem illuminated from
beneath in certain spots
A stray dog trots past
me paying me no notice
Very few birds remain
to keep me company
And cheer me from the
trees with their lovely songs
Even the friendly
mosquitoes are not coming to me
For their dinner
tonight
High up above, the
geese and ducks fly
in their v-shaped
flocks heading south
A goose from somewhere
in the left flank
Replaces the tired lead
goose at the nose of the "v"
The sky itself is a
kaleidoscope of colours
Deep blue overhead
Blending to baby blue
Fading to aqua marine
and teal
Which overlaps a pink:
with an orange and yellow glow
Finally melting into
purple along the horizon
A pale sliver of the
grey moon is visible to the left
A jet soars far in the
distance painting a streak of white smoke
To blend in with the
thin, sparse clouds
The clouds are more
condensed and thick on the horizon
Where the sun is
setting
Covering the sleepy sun
with a fluffy blanket
A motorbike zooms by on
the other side of the creek
Kicking up a trail of
dust that lingers for a while
I wish I could freeze
this moment in time
And stay in this place
forever
It is so picturesque
and beautiful
The surroundings are so
soothing and calming
That I forget all of my
worries
Daily minutia and
stress melt away
The clouds slowly fade,
dissipate, and disappear
The sky becomes ever
darker
A new chill in the wind
begins to nip at me
Night is upon me
Kevin Strong
1994
* First published by
The Taylor Trust in 2009
Happy Travels,
Kev
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Beautiful poetry - really puts you right by the creek! Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words. I was feeling so relaxed and calm that night that I had to write it down and share it with the world.
DeleteMaybe you don't have to travel far to have a peaceful, happy retirement. This could be you sitting by any creek or lake near your house.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I loved the poem, it's so vivid <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Pragati. That was my intent (to have a vivid and descriptive poem).
DeleteAbsolutely lovely. I can really picture this serene scene. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks. This poem is kind of a farewell to summer
DeleteI really felt this, I could feel how blissful this would have been to experience. Thank you for sharing, you're a very talented writer x x
ReplyDeleteYou are very kind. I am glad you felt immersed in your imagination.
DeleteVery picturesque description of a place that's blended with time
ReplyDeleteand space looking like an indian summer and observing the world,
very lovely..
I like that comment. observing the world. I was so amazed that I wanted to share it with words rather than a picture.
DeleteNow this poem reminds me of my trips to my local dam. The view was breath taking, the animals starting to calm down as the sun started to set, and view became more resilient with each passing second. This poem, has a very realistic feel to it. No weird sub-meanings, just a poem about the perfect summer evening.
ReplyDeleteThat means a lot coming from a ghost writer. This poem is very descriptive and the only symbolism really comes at the end.
DeleteAmazing peom. I like how it says the bird keep me company haha. It feels good sitting when birds wandering around on the ground.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. Yes, the birds were keeping me company and it was one of the many wonders of nature that I got to watch (better than a TV show).
DeleteSuch a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
DeletePretty awesome poem...
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive...
The dog pays you no notice, huh?story of my life...
Keep up the good work .
Thanks. I was experimenting with vivid descriptions of my surroundings.
DeleteWith dogs and mosquitoes ignoring me could be a sign...
Beautiful poem - really vivid imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much. I wanted this poem to be vivid to paint a picture in your mind.
DeleteLovely poem. I especially like the last stanza!
ReplyDeleteThanks, I appreciate the compliment on my poem.
DeleteSome lovely images on there and some excellent language choices. A really relaxing tone and an enjoyable read all round.
ReplyDeleteThat means a lot, thanks. You felt exactly how I wanted this poem to make you feel.
DeletePowerful imagery. Wonderful read. Love every bit of it! Thank you for inditing such a great piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words and support. I felt I had to capture that moment in writing and share it as a poem.
DeleteSo beautiful, it's as if I were really there, watching the sky and the surrounding. It dissipated my anxiety, and it was only through words. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliments, Luana. This relaxing poem is almost like meditation for me when I read it.
DeleteBeautiful poem. I love the flow of words and the pictures. Felt like was there ��
ReplyDeleteI am glad to immerse you in our vision and poetic words. Thanks.
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